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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 11, 2005 22:31:06 GMT -5
All alone as she stands under the street light Wondering what her life would be like If she didn't have roaches and rats where she lay If she didn't see innocent people capped everyday If the baby that cries had food to satisfy it's hunger these are just some of the things that this girl wonders If the pimps and hoes were doctors and nurses If instead of snatching them young men helped grandma's with their purses Livin life in the hood makes her question the purpose For livin' For lovin' For the reason she had to resort to st8 thuggin' but these questions and fears cannot be heard but through the art of spoken word
...Hit me back let me know what you think
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Post by Killer P on Aug 12, 2005 1:11:37 GMT -5
[glow=red,3,300]ON FIRE!!!!!!!!!!![/glow]
that was nice, love the way you spread the text across aswell.
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 12, 2005 11:49:35 GMT -5
lol thanx uppin.....
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Post by CrYsTaL*eYeZ on Aug 12, 2005 18:02:58 GMT -5
gurl dat shit was deep. it touched me a lil
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Cam3leon
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 12, 2005 18:16:16 GMT -5
Mos definitely, I'm feelin that one. Keep it up! Favorite Line: If the pimps and hoes were doctors and nurses/ If instead of snatching them young men helped grandma's with their purses
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 12, 2005 18:17:50 GMT -5
Some other kid said that was his favorite line too, but y'all wont see anymore of this from me cuz I'm not a poet
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 12, 2005 23:26:51 GMT -5
I think you a poet that just don't know it. That shit was to hot to handle. Ill to the fullest.
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 12, 2005 23:36:18 GMT -5
lol Whatever you say Papi
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