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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 6, 2005 17:47:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]originally posted by 1rapperunknown but he posted it in the wrong place so I reposting it for him. Cam3 your turn[/glow]
When I come I hit hard/ you gonna feal the charge/ strickin ya ass like a lightnin bolt/ you a tin man bitch I'm the hulk/ like Marshall Faulk I'm blazin dis nigga/ don't move boy cause I'll pull this trigga/ I think its time for a little change/ got these peeps laughin cause ya shit so lame/ If ya heard it ya self you wouldn't rap no more/ cause ya sound like Pauly Shore on da comedy store/ no-holds-bard/ no-bars-hold/ When I step up the game unfold/ ya rhymes are to old/ mines is to cold/ thats why my records are bout to get sold/ Just give up do me that favor/ cause if I beat ya now I'll beat ya lata/ so come on step up and your existence will cease/ well I guess thats my time so I'm out PEACE/
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 6, 2005 19:11:25 GMT -5
I see ur still namedropping Pauly in more rhymes Awfully fitting, since both your careers are washed up at the shoreline My rhymes are so quick-witted, they could probably warp time Yours are just thorns in my side like spines of a porcupine I guess you must be "too cold", comin' with that bare-naked flow Well if I'm the tinman, then you're the scarecrow; so where'd ur brain go? Just say no to those bad lyrics; homie, u'd hafta hear it to understand How its stung to listen like you slung a rubberband That recoils back and snaps out your eye, cuz U need to be quittin'; all that's spittin's just a waste of saliva This verse here'll leave u shipwrecked, abandoned like the cast of Survivor Leave u on a feeding tube kinda like Terry Schivo Listen mr. unknown, u aint gonna stop my mission Get in my path again I'll have to fry you like Popeye's chicken
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 6, 2005 20:56:44 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Punches-Cam3leon Personals-Cam3leon Word play-both Structure- both Flow- both Enjoyment-Cam3leon Overall choice- Cam3leon his verse was more personal[/glow]
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Post by Killer P on Aug 7, 2005 2:36:12 GMT -5
Flow= both Creativity= Cam3leon Punches=cam3leon wordplay= none enjoyment=none personals=none
Overall= Cam3leon
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 7, 2005 5:45:42 GMT -5
Cam3leon won round 1 hey now its your turn to go first.
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 7, 2005 12:59:33 GMT -5
Yo sorry I was out for a minute
Well now it's Round 2, still bound to pound dudes That want a challenge, but automatically sound like clown shoes Squeaking and stumbling over your own mediocre rhymes I hope you'll find A more suitable career, in place of fooling ears In thinking you're as cold as ice Nothing but a poltergeist, I see through you clearly My lyrics blow out your speakers and u can't even hear me I'm nearly finished but before u start responding Lemme get this out the way, I want u to know one thing Homie, "b real", must be in "insane in the brain" To think that taking my name in vain will change your game I'm Cam-three-leon, the moniker's not cuz I shapeshift Even though I unleash rhymes that give opponents facelifts But the fact is I'm versatile, in any way I choose I reverse and diverse styles, for that gift, I paid my dues But I live by the truth, whatever I say I do So keep your street cred, just hope ur verse can sway my mood
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 7, 2005 20:15:13 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]are you guys going to finishe this battle[/glow]
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 7, 2005 20:27:30 GMT -5
I started this round. It's unknown's turn.
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 7, 2005 20:33:38 GMT -5
I'm back in da game and I'm gonna win/ I'm gonna make you feel this so lets begin/ Sorry I was gone I had shit to do/ but now I'm back thats right its round 2/ Yet my life is more important then fuckin ova you/ Sit back and relax,don't ask no questions/ Cause my shit is more important than ya last confession/ The game is hard, man I ain't messin/ and you tryin to make it, you gonna need some blessins/ So now you callin me glass/ At last, I'm bout to bust ya ass/ Like a ghost from ya past boy/ Last name Jones Jr. first name Roy/ So come on boy lets do this thing/ Hit you in the jaw and make your ears ring/ I take a look at your rhymes, and they just fine/ But I see 2 lines, that look like mine/ Remember on MTV when we first battled/ I used the facelift line and that shit left you rattled/ Ya gig is up so just surrender/ You got caught Mr. Pretender/
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Cam3leon
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 7, 2005 22:12:50 GMT -5
Hey good battle, man
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Post by Killer P on Aug 8, 2005 9:56:28 GMT -5
Flow= rapperunkwon Creativity= Cam3leon Punches=cam3leon wordplay= cam3leon enjoyment=cam3leon personals=none
Overall= Cam3leon
Cam3leon- I'm Cam-three-leon, the moniker's not cuz I shapeshift Even though I unleash rhymes that give opponents facelifts [glow=green,2,300](nice man,this was ur best line, lmao)[/glow]
rapperunknown- u got talent man just got to use it, try to hit ur opponent with unusal words that would mean the same as what u use except it would be new and unique, keep elevating
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Cam3leon
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 8, 2005 9:57:37 GMT -5
Vote up ppl.
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Post by Cam3leon on Aug 8, 2005 10:38:42 GMT -5
Uppin
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Post by jusmurda on Aug 8, 2005 10:44:07 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Punches-Cam3leon Personals-um Word play-both Structure- both Flow- both Enjoyment-Cam3leon Overall-Cam3leon[/glow]
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 8, 2005 13:59:39 GMT -5
I won't complain cause he won but if you read my flow you see that he stole 1 of my lines from a battle that we had on MTV. I can't believe you beat me with my own line and then got props on it by killer P at that. Congrats anyways peeps.
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