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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 12, 2005 23:18:16 GMT -5
when ever you ready you should already know the rules but no more than 20 lines.
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 13, 2005 10:23:21 GMT -5
checkin in you said you would be here.
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Post by ASinYztr7Shad0wX on Aug 13, 2005 13:03:04 GMT -5
i sed id put it here today. i didnt mean any time before the afternoon. shit i just woke up.
Submissive in the hands of eternal flow/ my burna goes and buds crypitc lands with infernal glow/ Your egotistical, breathin wit a clogged dome/ so here we go mista cool, but theres a reason ya not known/ I gratify essense with the exceptance that would safisy legends/ I sport a hat and tie not a rapper wit ya whacker rides and still break ya records/ Flows stormin meldodic tragedy, it had to be blows formin chaotic anatomy/ Ya veins run with the pain from when my game stung the way got it's catastrophe/ Ya flows tight yea right/ bout as tight as ya mother after last night/ ya cant strike, ya to feeble minded no expansion/ Advancemant in times of evil i find it romancin/ Romancin in the thoughts of all that swung the swords/ For the underlords, And dancin in the morgues of all hung by what they saw/ Acceptance of your defeat/ would beat aggressives to beat me/ Cuz the only chance ya lonely hands have to own by brain/ Is me just given up the written stuff and diggin my own grave/
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 13, 2005 18:18:22 GMT -5
I didn't really read ya whole rhyme cause it was wack/ I should fold it up and straight mail it back/ You sayin the same thing as everyone else/ Do they control you, can't you think for ya self/ Ya wastin ya time tryin to make ya flow complicated/ The words that rhyme need to be updated/ I think I found the problem you listen to heavy metal/ Well you battlin the wrong person cause I'm a lyrical rebel/ Everyone tries to use my name against me bitch/ But they don't know the name of the man that put you in a ditch/ Next time you flow try to use your noodle/ Cause this one makes it look like you got the mind of a poodle/ Talkin bout underlords and warlocks like this is dungens and dragons/ You bout to lose this battle but you already bragin/ Sittin at ya house screamin I'm a winner/ Go back to school bitch you just a beginer/ Stop tryin to rap you fake head banger/ Before I run ova ya as in my new ford ranger/
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CrYsTaL*eYeZ
lightweight
true playa fo sho' an if you in to me you gotz to go
Posts: 143
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Post by CrYsTaL*eYeZ on Aug 13, 2005 21:03:12 GMT -5
punches:unknown personal:unknown wordplay:asinyztr7 structure:unknown flow:unknown enjoyment:unknown overall: unknow i could understand his betta and new wut he was sayin. fav lins:stop tryin to rap you fake head banger/ before i run ova ya ass in my new ford ranger/
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 13, 2005 21:39:26 GMT -5
Punches:Unknown Personals:Unknown Wordplay:ASinYztr7Shad0wX Structure:both Enjoyment:both Overall:Unknown He cam more personal than ASinYztr7 fave line Unknown:I didn't really read ya whole rhyme cause it was wack/ I should fold it up and straight mail it back/
fave line ASinYztr7:Cuz the only chance ya lonely hands have to own by brain/ Is me just given up the written stuff and diggin my own grave/
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CrYsTaL*eYeZ
lightweight
true playa fo sho' an if you in to me you gotz to go
Posts: 143
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Post by CrYsTaL*eYeZ on Aug 13, 2005 21:49:38 GMT -5
ummm how can personal be word play ^^^^^
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Post by LILBLUEJAY on Aug 13, 2005 22:28:01 GMT -5
punches:unknown personal:unknown wordplay:asinyztr7 structure:unknown flow:unknown enjoyment:unknown overall: ima go wit unknown cuz his shit was just better plain and simple. he had way better punches
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 13, 2005 22:35:07 GMT -5
3-0 I won battle ova.
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Post by ASinYztr7Shad0wX on Aug 13, 2005 23:12:34 GMT -5
dont hate me cuz im beautiful 
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Post by 1rapperunknown on Aug 13, 2005 23:14:06 GMT -5
lol you funny man good attitude.
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 13, 2005 23:26:45 GMT -5
More ppl need that attitude AsinYztr7 you need to give out some lessons fa real
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