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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 9, 2005 11:10:18 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]This is an old battle between me and Unknown. I know it's weak but I was just starting out.
RapperUnknown I'll drop the first verse: but when I'm done you'll need a nurse: and when I spit my rhymes I need not curse: I spit all day and I spit all night: I spit in the dark I need no light: yeah thats right: new kid on da block puttin up a fight: my lyrics are outta ya vision: when ya up againt me its a bad decision: I seen ya stuff about the toasta: yeah ya right but I'll just roast ya: you^ got game and I can tell you ain't fake: when ya read my lyrics ya feel the earth shake: oven baked, right to perfection: you can't beat me I already won da election
Me ok.... Rapper-unknown change ya name to Rapper-gone-home/ Cuz that' what you gon do after my lyrics hit ya dome/ New kid's on the block suck a lot of dick you aint heard/ ya lyrics make the earth shake that sh*t's absurd/ And ya right the lyrics ya spittin are outta my vision/ ya a rookie I'm a veteran dawg check my precision/ It's a cock and blast one shot fast/ That means one lyrical bullet penetrating ya a*s/ Yeah I cursed cuz i wanted to can't nobody stop me/ I'm already a boulder so can't nobody rock me/[/glow]
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 9, 2005 12:12:27 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]any feedback on this one?[/glow]
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Post by Killer P on Aug 9, 2005 13:53:57 GMT -5
weak battle, but the good points are you can notice your creativity and your wordplay showing a little bit so the talent as there but it just wasnt shining
keep at it murda, and try to make ur lines jus a bit longer
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Post by Murda Mami on Aug 9, 2005 13:55:08 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Yeah that was a weak battle I did say that[/glow]
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Post by phorenzik on Aug 12, 2005 5:08:20 GMT -5
yeah it was pretty weak, gotta b honest but there were a few good points shinin thru 5/10
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