MY Verse from "wat i got"

[WildCat]

Niggas is SHISTY, and LATELY no body gives a shit
See u wit a chain that they want so they TAKIN IT
Say it’s GANGSTA, bunch of PRANKSTAS, tryin o look hard
But they WANKSTAS, robbing BANKS TA, fill they card
I should pray, cuz I need JESUS to grow the man inside of me
So I’m on my knees, praying to MY LORD, bless my enemies
Yeah, I’m thankful for what I got, peps wanna take from me
Threatin my life, cuz I’m right, so they hatin me
LIFE is full of emotions so feel my PAIN
Cuz in my SOUL, sun don’t shine, only RAIN
I’ma foreva be a failure and neva to succeed
I’ve been followin, lately, I feel I’m chosen ta lead
Niggas will give they fuckin life to see you fall
Get at yo homies and yo family to see you crawl
But thank you fo lettin they sick fantasies elude them eRRy day
I know that you is protecting me but I still have my AK, to spray
So I’m thanking you for what I got at every livin minute
I thank you fo family and how they livin every minute
So I get up off my knees and say in JESUS’ name as I pray
Thank you god for lettin me survive another day

[WildCat]

Can i get some feed

[Killer P]

no feedbak until you spit rank verse, you can use this one if you want

[WildCat]

ok well i did...so can i get some feedback now

[phorenzik]

agen a pretty orrite effort 7/10

[WildCat]

^^^THANX

[WildCat]

^^^UPPIN

[Red X aka Tony Buns]

[glow=red,2,300]Hmm i Give It a 4 outta 10

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